Thursday, July 11, 2019

"My Dear Aunt Sally" paper - ROUGH DRAFT


Math 151
Summer 2019

Dear Aunt Sally –
               
          I am glad to hear that your garden is growing so well and that the dog hasn’t given you any trouble.  As you know, I am taking a College Algebra course this summer.  I am learning all kinds of interesting things about mathematical relationships. We are specifically focused on learning different types of functions.  A function is a kind of relationship, where one thing equals only one other value. 

It’s like when you go shopping sales.  Let’s say you found Cheerios on sale for $3.99 per box, the relationship between the box’s individual cost, how many boxes you would buy, and your total cost would be a function.  See, the number of boxes you would buy is known as an independent variable, which we can represent as just the letter x.  It is also an independent variable, or just an input.  We know that every box is $3.99, which is a constant, because the price stays the same no matter how many boxes of Cheerios you buy.  The final cost is your dependent variable, or output, (which can be written as f(x) or “f of x” as we call it in class) because it depends on how many boxes you buy. 

This can be represented by the equation f(x)=3.99x, where 3.99 is the cost per box, x is the number of boxes, and f(x) or Y is the total cost.  In my Algebra class, we would have called this kind of a function a “one-to-one” function, which means that each x value, or the number of boxes you buy, is equal to only one cost. If you buy one box, it is $3.99.  If you buy 2 boxes, it is $7.98 and so on.  You will not pay $7.98 for only one box or for three or more boxes.  You will only ever pay $7.98 for two boxes.  No more, no less. 

We’re also learning how to graph various functions on a graph, and what that means.  There are many ways that we can graph a function, but the most common way to graph a line is by x- and y-intercept.  This is the point where the line passes the x-axis (or y-axis) on a graph. Another way to say this is that it is the value of x when y is zero, or vice versa.  If you bought zero boxes of cheerios, you would spend $0, so the line would include a point where zero equals zero or the point (0,0) where the first 0 is the number of boxes (or x) and the second value (the y value) is how much it cost total, which is also 0.  Another point on the graph would be (2, $7.98) and (3, $11.97) and so on.  The total x values, the values {0, 1, 2, 3…}, represent the “domain” of the function.  The domain is the set of all of the input variables as a list.  The range is the set of all outputs, so {3.99, 7.98, 11.97…).  With the cereal relationship, the graph starts at 0 boxes for $0, then one box for $3.99, two for $7.98, three for $11.97 and so on.  This creates a straight line up the graph at a 90-degree angle from the point of origin.  We would call this a linear function because it makes a straight line!

There are many kinds of relationships in math, and especially as they relate to functions, but I fear that I have already bored you to tears.  I look forward to your next correspondence!

Love,

Katlin <3



---------------------
Score: 10/10
Professor Comments: Hi (Katlin), great job on this rough draft. This is really a very good submission even for a final draft. There are a couple of things you could do to improve your letter. Maybe provide a picture of the cereal box graph that you describe. Or possibly, provide a second real-life example or even a non-example to contrast something that is not a function. Either of these I think would help to solidify the concept for aunt Sally.

Your writing mechanics are great and you clearly understand what is a function. You do make a reference to a one-to-one function which is not correct so revisit that statement. Overall, you have a really solid letter already.

I hope this helps you focus your final draft. I have added full credit for the rough draft (quiz grade). Good job!